Character designs

So, here's my version of Calcor the executioner:

https://2img.net/h/i119.photobucket.com/albums/o121/Jose_Puustinen/CalcortheExecutioner.jpg

dude i love this sketch it is very interesting. it is a very good representation of how calcor will look good job. is there any way u could make a sketch of clovis?

Thanks Justin! Great to hear that you like it.

Sure! Clovis' a white-paladin-knight, right? Other characteristics? Choice of weapon?

definityely liking this guy. nice boots. Good job Jose

EXACTLY as I imagined Calcor. We could expect nothing less from Jose. Excellent. Yes, Clovis is a white paladin. Make him a bit cocky, sort of the "royal brat", but he still has class. I'd say give him a lance of some type, and put him on horseback. He is the bad guy, right? I'm not exactly sure how this is all working out...

You would expect nothing less, wyvern? Oh, com'on.. Anyway, thanks ben & wyvern!

I'm a little confused about Clovis, because justin said that he's some sort of dark warrior, with two blades as weapons and that he'd wear some kind of black robe. And wyvern says (and I also found similar ideas under the Emo-topic) that he's a white knight/paladin with a lance. Which is he?

Or is he both? He is fighting the executioners, and he controls the military forces, right? So I could imagine him as some holy knight and that the people depend on him to purify the world of the executioners and the "spores". However, since he begins to desire the power of the "spores"-orwhatevertheyare, which gives control over fiends, I could also imagine him as a white knight, who practises some wicked dark magic arts in secrecy. And that these wicked teachings together with his lust for power consumes his mind. Is this the dumbest idea?

Whatever it is that you guys had in mind, I can just do two sketches of him, one as a white knight and the other one as a dark warrior, and I'll leave the rest to you..

I think you have the right idea, Jose. That's what we were thinking...although by the end of the movie I think he may have undergone some sort of dark transformation due to his practices.

What would Endless look like? Some sort of four-winged almighty creature? Or maybe more of a humanoid figure? Lol, Jose, once you catch your breath, could you draw that for us too?

Sure, I'll try, once those clovis-sketches are done.

Clovis?? dang i really need to get back on this thing ive been gone to long !!

Clovis: gone mad, but it doesn't show, human white night(paladin), uses a long barrel handgun and a lance (or rapier, take your pick[personally I like the rapier, makes for sword/gun dual weilding sweetness]). He has darkened from a lack of sleep, but not quite bloodshot. That's all I got right now.

Alright then, here is a sketch of Clovis. In this sketch I meant to draw him as if he wasn't insane yet. This propably isn't exactly what you had imagined, but it just sort of "appeared" on the paper, I couldn't help it..

He doesn't have a gun in this sketch nor a rapier because Ben's information came a little too late, I had already done the sketch. And sorry, wyvern, no horses either.. Just imagine the rapier, gun and the horse and whatever else that might be missing from this sketch.

https://2img.net/h/i119.photobucket.com/albums/o121/Jose_Puustinen/ClovisthePaladin.jpg

LOOK ITS THE KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR THAT GIRLS WANT.... o wait no that just clovis NEVERMIND!!!

i love this sketch we need to now start writing the story now since we have the main characters sketches. we all need to put into this story and debate upon it. so far we have a setting goal and what is going to happen now we just need to input all of our ideas and take the best ones.

exsactly not he siad STORY not game story make this thing a story like format *Thats your que wyrvern*

Lol...I'll try to keep up. Great job, Jose, although one thing is troubling me. You've got the right idea with Clovis' character, but I think his outfit is a little...Idunno, "rugged" for his character. I was thinking he would be in, like, billowing white robes and silvery armor, possibly slimmer, not exactly the "woodsman"-type sketch you have. Don't get me wrong, it's great, just a different concept than I had originally imagined.

Now you can draw him with the horse, the gun, and the rapier...lol...if you ever get too tired just tell us. I'm pretty sure us writers will be worn out soon enough.

"Woodsman"? Ouch.. I spent 6 hours on that sketch. Well.. I guess I could do a new one, something that's less "rugged". But no horses, they are so hard to draw! There's enough trouble with human anatomy..

Jose buddy... drawing is a art and well it will take 12 hours to please some cridicts i mean wryvern is hard to please lol

Well, it has been quite easy to please him so far.. hmm..

I like this one, Clovis looks sophiticated and well-bred, while Calcor looks much more outdoorsy. They're as close to perfect as they could be at this stage.

I like em all...

Justin asked me to draw Psyno, Tenels and Felnor, so here is Felnor the Dragon Rider:

https://2img.net/h/i119.photobucket.com/albums/o121/Jose_Puustinen/FelnortheDragonRider.jpg

All RIGHT!!! Really likin' it Jose. Just a few tiny things...possibly, as a final concept, I suggest that Felnor has a bit shorter hair, and maybe facial hair of some sort, just to emphasize his "rough-around-the-edges" persona. Still very impressive!

Thanks! Shorter hair and some facial-hair.. Got it!

thanks again for the time u put into this and it is really amazing

Thanks, and you're welcome!