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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 05, 2007 5:27 am

I like that part about Rin and Malico in a resistance movement, it gives depth to the characters. Rin has to go through feelings such as: how many civilian lives is she ready to sacrifice to stop his father?
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PostSubject: here is the latin word for fear   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 06, 2007 10:35 pm

formidilosus : causing dread, fear, terror
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 07, 2007 8:56 am

WHY MUST THE MOVIE BE EVIL Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 07, 2007 10:40 am

Because too many movies operate from feel good scene to feel good scene, and we want to see how it goes over.
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PostSubject: the main city attack   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 07, 2007 10:58 am

After the terrorist attack on the main city of the empire, emperor Clovis made a statement to those who commited the act on the capital, “If we find who you are we will use all of the military power that is in this great empire, with preparations within our empire these terrorists will fall to the hands of Xion and its power…………” Malico and Rin have a meeting with their group concerning this attack….”Well our attack on the civics building went down as a success dropped some fear into those capitalist scum….” “ Yeah from what Malico stated these politicians are scared and afraid of another attack on their precious capitalist system….” This next attack we are planning is surely to catch their attention….We are going to destroy one of their most sacred places the Palace of The Emperor which hold the pieces of Valoim.” Which we are after to destroy if we can destroy that palace with it…..” “ The best points of entrance are the south and east points of the underground system that runs underneath the palace which is never guarded at all or slim chance of a guard even being down there.
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 07, 2007 1:02 pm

GREAT FIRST WERE BEING EVIL THEN WE MAKE TERRORIST!!! thanks for supporting them Jusint Mad Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 07, 2007 4:09 pm

These aren't Jihad, Josh. Cool it and go w/ the flow please. Justin's in charge.

And I agree, too many movies are optimistic w/ their head in the clouds. We need to portray real feelings of anger and hurt here. Cause let's face it, the world ain't a pretty place.
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 09, 2007 10:48 am

In Zorion it is.
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 09, 2007 3:22 pm

Somebody is angry. LOL
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Jun 10, 2007 8:54 pm

Granted, the scenery may be breathtaking. But the interactions between the characters will reveal a dark human nature, subliminally buried beneath the skin. And from what I've heard, it doesn't end happily either...
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PostSubject: Re: new story variation   new story variation - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Jun 10, 2007 9:37 pm

Zorion to everyone. lol!
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